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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #30 on: November 29, 2011, 01:50:45 PM »

that is fixed does it look better?
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #31 on: November 29, 2011, 02:02:45 PM »
Much better, in my opinion!

It's looking great so far, keep up the good work!
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #32 on: November 29, 2011, 09:06:35 PM »
That looks good. I may have to steal that runes idea.

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #33 on: November 30, 2011, 04:25:42 PM »
The heart looks more symmetrical in this pic than the previous one.  Nicely done!  Can't wait to see the painting process start!
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #34 on: November 30, 2011, 07:28:53 PM »
The heart looks a lot better.
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #35 on: November 30, 2011, 07:47:07 PM »
you really couldn't see it by looking at it in person the picture really brought it out. i hadn't even noticed until after i saw it in person.
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #36 on: November 30, 2011, 09:40:07 PM »
I think it looks pretty great so far.  Only suggestion (if it's not too hard) is to see if you can have the armor plates separate the symbol as well.  As in if you follow the armor lines have them bisect those parts that run over them.   It would help it look stock.

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #37 on: November 30, 2011, 09:49:26 PM »
would that look better or i was thinking of adding dimension to the craftworld symbol
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #38 on: November 30, 2011, 09:54:43 PM »
As in if you follow the armor lines have them bisect those parts that run over them.
I get what you're saying and I like what you're saying. I think it's why I dislike the heart now, because it doesn't look like it belongs, and I think this suggestion is the fix.

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #39 on: November 30, 2011, 10:17:59 PM »
I shortened the arms on the y part of the symbol and i am wondering would it be better to add new lines around the heart and make it 3d in a way or to just add the armour lines through the heart
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #40 on: November 30, 2011, 11:14:20 PM »
Armor lines through the heart.  It also seems to fit the weird emo of Eldar.  Like a giant broken heart (that is only broken because you have to assemble titans in pieces).

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #41 on: December 07, 2011, 10:47:54 PM »
is this what you were thinking? Does this look better?

I still have a little cleaning up to do.
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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #42 on: December 07, 2011, 11:00:42 PM »
Yeah, that's basically what I was thinking. It of course would look much better after paint.

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #43 on: December 07, 2011, 11:13:59 PM »
Yes!

Sorry for the extra work but it's pretty awesome.

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Re: Forge World Phantom Titan
« Reply #44 on: December 08, 2011, 06:23:23 PM »
Its not extra if it makes my expensive model look just that much better. Thanks for the advice.
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